Wednesday, November 15, 2006


A prayer wafts up
amid the noise of day
thoughts louder than words
crash heavily


the flow of life
at times
at times
making my feet take off dancing
a life of their own
joy flowing down to my toes

the mixture bittersweet
and lovely


happy and blue 2 said...

That was nice..
Hope you have a nice day..

niki d said...

That's exactly how I feel! You seem to have a knack for expressing what I just can't. Thanks Hil, have a great day! :)

nachtwache said...

Yes, that's life, ups and downs, like a rollercoaster. You did express it beautifully! All the best with the report cards!

Dennaliatha said...

What a lovely poem!

You certainly have the gift, friend.